by ambise
Just two examples of confusion . Taught for taut and complementing for complimenting. Use a dictionary or get an editor
Too many misspelled and misplaced $5 words and that's only a fraction of what's wrong with this story.
If you want to convince us of something then you have to build it up. Otherwise this is just a lame orgy in a hotel and does not belong in NonCon.
Try again
I would guess English is not your 1st language, seems like you used Google translate. But the story had promise. Not sure what category it should be in, but not non con.