All Comments on 'Maid Taken'

by ambise

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Language?

Just two examples of confusion . Taught for taut and complementing for complimenting. Use a dictionary or get an editor

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I Agree

Too many misspelled and misplaced $5 words and that's only a fraction of what's wrong with this story.

If you want to convince us of something then you have to build it up. Otherwise this is just a lame orgy in a hotel and does not belong in NonCon.

Try again

merrySMmerrySM9 months ago

I would guess English is not your 1st language, seems like you used Google translate. But the story had promise. Not sure what category it should be in, but not non con.

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