All Comments on 'Maid, Teacher, Ex-Student Final Exam'

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chytownchytownalmost 4 years ago
Entertaining Read***

Thanks for sharing. It was different.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Grammar!

You have a number of basic grammar errors.

Plotwise you should mention that Kim is small early on and a better word is petite.

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