All Comments on 'Maid to Order Ch. 01'

interesting start

Excellent story. I would like to know more backstory about the place that creates and trains them and how they picked Felcity.

Loved this, hope you keep writing more chapters

The story feels rushed but it is written well..

A bit too fast both with Felicity’s mental changes and with revealing of the master plot. Eagerness of the topic is appreciated but so is our minds filling in some of the blanks as we discover what is really happening can be hot. Being spoon fed every detail can be too much.