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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I wanted to like it...I did

I really did...but a lot of the dialogue was kinda, well, for a lack of a better word, corny. It was really difficult imagining a lot of the characters even saying some of that stuff. For example, "...I'm just trying to keep my game tight..." or "For sure, playa for sure."

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Hi, and Thanks for visiting my page. If you've just discovered my little corner of the Literotica universe, allow me to introduce myself. I write contemporary erotic romance, meant for Adults Only. I write stories with an interracial twist, Ebony woman with white man. I thi...