All Comments on 'Make Me Hate You Ch. 01'

Can’t really figure out Mrs Booth. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks

..................................but you write so well! 5*

A new story from AO! Next chapter, please. Randi.

The bad news first. It’s Erotic Couplings not BDSM. A lot of punctuation errors plus a few others. That’s it.

The good news. I really enjoyed it and the errors aren’t significant enough to make the story any less enjoyable or justification for marking it down. Nice to read a story (this is my bias coming out) from a fellow British writer.

I read that it’s not your usual type of story, out of your comfort zone, and I understand when you say you enjoyed the challenge. Over half of my stories are BDSM, which I write from the Femdom angle, and rest are in five different categories. I also enjoy writing outside my comfort zone.

It might appear to readers that the story is MALEDOMinated but it’s actually FEMDOMinated. The appropriate phrase is she is “topping from the bottom.”

Started with too much about Julia then offered much with Mrs Booth but hasn't gone anywhere yet. More to come?

Nice beginning!