All Comments on 'Make Me Hate You Ch. 02'

This is only the second story of yours I’ve read, the first one being chapter one of this story. I didn’t enjoy this as much as the first story and the main reason was that it is, in my opinion, about 2,000 words too long. I read the first chapter in one sitting but I got bored with this second chapter and it was an effort to come back to it twenty four hours later.

You could have done with an editor to cut out all the chaff. Plus, as with the first chapter, many punctuations errors together with spelling and other silly errors that an editor would pick up on. I’m assuming you don’t have an editor.

I repeat my comments about it not being BDSM but it was published before I made my first comment.

I’m not sure what people expect from writers on here . Is this not somewhere they can express themselves without criticism? It is an amateur setting. Piss on those who are perfect. I thoroughly enjoyed the story mistakes and all. If they’re so easy to look for flaws then where is their efforts. I’m totally sick of putting people down for the efforts made by genuine people who express their ideas .

Keep writing... I will read what you put down on here as privilege you have afforded me with pleasure. Thank you for that

Bill

I’m very much enjoying this. Interesting characters, good dialogue.