by RaunchyRamen
Great story! You must return and make a sequel! Can't leave us hanging like this!
I think it was a very good story but felt like you rushed through it
I assure you, I use a proof-reader. I'm Canadian. The spelling and grammar is correct as to the use of language in my place of birth. Cheers.
That's not really my writing story, to be honest. I could drag out stories, but it's just not my kind of thing. I'll definitely keep in mind your suggestions for future though. But yeah, I like to keep things simple! ;D
Take your time telling the story- did you have a bus to catch or something prior to posting this? As a straight stroke story , this is dandy but it coulda/woulda/shoulda been more then that. the best advice for strippers is 1) reach for your buttons 2) look the audience in the eye 3) act like you got all day!