All Comments on 'Making Joan Beg'

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Lestats CasperLestats Casperover 17 years ago
What I enjoy

I think my favourite part of this story is the ending. The reference to the slave being so needy that she's trembling, his "perhaps" promise of being a good girl leading to use the following night...the mention of her needy wet pussy. These are the things a slave girl knows and feels, incessantly, each day.

The "real" factor to this story has my vote, I enjoyed it for bringing my home life of each day, to a prose piece that many can view and enjoy. I thank you.

shaneeshaneealmost 15 years ago
CRAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!

He is nothing but a sadistic bastard who should have his cock sawed off and his balls eaten by fire ants!! Ehmmmmm! And ... she should be the one releasing them

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