All Comments on 'Making Master Z's Whore'

Just like a rich man to go out and get what he wants, whether the object of his desire wants to be possessed by him or not.

Great story, Cinders. This is by far the harshest story that I’ve read from you and, for me, it was one of the horniest.

A BDSM story that goes way beyond tying your play partner up and teasing them. And as for my favorite part, I’ll only give you one clue so as not to give any spoilers, his mark.

Wildcat

I do not normally like long stories, however... I am anxious to see what is next in this series... I do hope you continue it.

Please tell me there is more to this story?

I REALY ENJOYED YOURE STORY I HOPE THERES MORE PLEASSSSSSEEEEEE;)

and I gave it only four because of the many typos and poor grammar that I found. Cheese! Reread the story with a critical eye; some of the mistakes are pitiful.

I almost exited this story, but it somehow drew me back in. Loved it, mandatory to make more chapters.

I found your story very arousing. It brought me back to my ex-husband his Boss. He was like that too, he recognised my need. I hated him, but I wanted him too...

That story was so damn HOT! I really hope you make a sequel for it. Add more sex, if you could...

alucinante y muy bien escrito, creo que da para mas capitulos, porque esto recien comienza, espero muy pronta actualizacion. am_sr

Why was this never finished???

Holy moly. Hot as fuck!

My hands may have wandered reading that!

I thought it was going in the direction of Lance being offered a turn to fck her dirty mouth, whilst she was bound! Master would watch of course and if she showed any resistance … SPANK!