by gypsee
I read the previous comments and I can agree that these are short. BUT, give me the choice of not having them, or having them short, and I know my choice. Keep her as she is, make it short snappy and hot, and keep pumping them out, (or having him pump her in)
...she needs a BLACK MASTER to train her when sonny is not there...as assigned by sonny...with a massive BLACK member to work her with...declaring that HE is her real and sole owner...not sonny...YOU GO GIRL!!!...XXXXXXXXOXOXOXOXO..;)))
It was good you should write a chapter 3 though possibly make it longer.
A good but short second chapter, I hope the next will be longer.