All Comments on 'Making Moves'

Once again... another truly wonderful, well written story. It was erotic which is such a nice change from some of what is written on this place. I will continue to look for you're other stories. ~blessed be

Just a tad bit long, but well worth it. Well written. Overall, a very good job.

Well written and engaging. I would like to go further into this story with maybe another chapter where lust becoms Love.

Great Read!

I really liked this story, it built up to a nice rhythm and it wasn't just senseless sex. It was so arousing for me because it was so well-written and it didn't have distracting errors in spelling or those euphemisms for human genitalia that make stop reading so I can giggle! my only complaint would be that the verbalising of the moaning (hrnn) was a little weird for me but I loved this! A voyeur version or a followup sounds like a great idea.

You did a great job. I did notice that the few spelling mistakes you made were mostly at the start of the sex...typing with one hand were you?

The voyuer angle sounds perfect.

Thank you for writing a story that didn't get overrun by racist wording and stereotypes. Such a beautiful love story.

It was so hot but at the same time romantic. Great one:-)

Extremely well written and the closest thing to a visual story I've read in a long time, if ever!

This was much more enjoyable than the usual 'superior black dick' plots in Interracial Erotica. Some brothas want romance and passion as much as, if not more than, just rutting.

really enjoyed. I wish I was Calvin..lol.

it was good one of the best I would love next chapter where she gets pregnant and they get married.

Very cinematic! You must do the voyeur follow-up.