All Comments on 'Making My Brother's Slut Mine'

I really, really, REALLY hate getting to the end of a story and only THEN finding out it's not a complete story. Do you care so little about your own story -- or is it the readers -- that you couldn't be bothered to add a simple chapter number in the title?

I lost interest at the point his cock is bigger than his brothers. 10 inches. What bullshit. Besides lame sex and no character development the other comments apply. Total waste of time.

1 star

DragonRider55

My suggestion is pacing. The idea seems good but the pacing of the story felt rushed, the details were nonexistent. Basically to short, to fast, no detail.

You promise chapter 2, but it doesn't come.......

Where is Chapter 2? You Left Us Hanging Wanting More...………..