All Comments on 'Making My Fantasy Real'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Nice

of course they live happily ever after. Good secure relationships are like that - happy.

impo_61impo_61about 9 years ago
Just adult fun...all in agreement...

Just adult fun...all in agreement...3*

magpieolasmagpieolasabout 8 years ago
Very nice.

Loved the build up. You also have a great writing style. Ty!

bworth1943bworth1943almost 7 years ago
Fantasy guy

Good story and writing, but finished too fast. I think cliff might have been invited back a few more times , even after he got married. He would have told her about his relationship with his friends and they would may become a loving foursome, for life.

cubbies4vrscubbies4vrsover 4 years ago
Good story

I enjoyed reading this and of course, the threesome made it that much more exciting...

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