All Comments on 'Making of a Black Cock Whore Ch. 02'

why are niggers so popular for shit and cuck?

Please recheck and edit your story. There are punctuation marks missing, can't even understand where exactly a sentence is getting over. No quotation marks for half the dialogues. Look for the difference between 'your' and 'you're', there's a lot of confusion there. Do a grammar and spell check as well.

Advice or even critism I can take it does help in future writing, but plss i beg not frpom people giving no name . where can i find your works? if you have ever had any published that is.

Can you put a spade with the litter Q in the middle on each tit. I would also put black bareback cock only above her pussy. Maybe black cock whore on her chest.

Shaving doesn't hurt, dude

first time i read it so far so good just another black cock whore getting what she deserves can|t wait to see how she ends up fucking ruined beyond belief way this white whore is going

Good story. Run on sentences detract a bit.

Being a black man’s property is what all us white woman should desire❤️❤️❤️