All Comments on 'Making of a Slut Wife Ch. 04'

This story is losing its edge it was still ok but nowhere near as good as earlier chapters. It seems like you're just rusing throught the story with very little set up.

Enjoyed this installment. I have to agree with the first comment you seem to have changed your style perhaps because of the earlier comments? This story started with installments so we expect it to have several chapters so continue to paint your picture for us. In the first chapters you helped us to picture by being descriptive. Get back to thinking about what you and Sue were feeling. Thanks again for sharing.

Manfred

She can't be a total slut unless she starts getting it on at work too.

You are doing a nice job with your story. Keep it going.

I remember my wife when she took her first black man and told me about it... the old adage is true "once a black man always more"

You can easily tell how inexperienced someone is by their comments. I'm just glad, i'm not the one fucking Mr. Wham Bam.