All Comments on 'Making Out: A Base Too Far'

more please! x

more pretty please. does she get pg?

an ass

Wow, very happy with the mount of people who have read my story. I see a few things that now stick out to me...poor word choices, a misspelled word (or two). I had not planned to continue this story but will ruminate on it. I think it will be typical of my writings in these ways: submissive female, pregnancy risk, told from the female viewpoint. I have other stories I want to tell!

I about came rubbing myself under my desk. That would have been bad sitting here in the office. That was so explicitly hot. Thank you.

And I think it never would have gone this far as I think he would have had a sore set of balls almost immediately. Not too plausible.

Good one.....

You cum inside her......omg......did she pregnant with your baby! Keep cumming continue story.....

Just hit 10,000 views! I am awed that I have created something so many others have seen. Thanks to the almost 100 people that have voted (that is about 1% of the views). I have a second story in the works (sorry it is not a second part to this one, still ruminating on ways to continue or if I want to continue) but have not had any luck connecting with an editor through literotica. Eventually I may need to submit it like I did this one, unedited.

This sounds very similar to an actual experience I've had. Only not on carpet. I hate floor sex. Thanks for the trip down memory lane.

Well written and so hot!

This ws a great story and you write so well that i felt like i was really there and the story was about me. I was a little uncomfortable when he started to take control though. I thik it would have been so muvh better if they'd agreed to the domination in advance. Just a few lines would do it. If you worked it into their already steamy foreplay then it could have been the catalyst to her pulling down her wet panties to expose herself to his domination. I'm getting hot again just imagining what that scene would be like....