by bandito_slim
...has been mentioned in the new story review thread.
Sincerely,
Lizzy
Review Thread
http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?t=428901
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http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?t=428875
Bandito,
Your story was very easy to read. The paragraphs were a nice length, the dialogue good. The teacher a real SOB. I know it's just a character in a story; but when I finished it I wanted to punch your character right in the nose. Hey, wait a minute - that's effective storytelling. *grins* Ya did good!
duddle
Good, but would like to hear more details about the body of the girl.