All Comments on 'Making the Grade'

by bandito_slim

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Your story...

...has been mentioned in the new story review thread.

Sincerely,

Lizzy

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duddle146duddle146almost 18 years ago
Got to be fantasy!

Bandito,

Your story was very easy to read. The paragraphs were a nice length, the dialogue good. The teacher a real SOB. I know it's just a character in a story; but when I finished it I wanted to punch your character right in the nose. Hey, wait a minute - that's effective storytelling. *grins* Ya did good!

duddle

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Keep on writing

Good, but would like to hear more details about the body of the girl.

Anonymous
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