by metooiseeyou
This was very enjoyable to read. Unique premise, very intense and descriptive scenes.
I can't wait to read more of what you may write in the future.
5 stars.
If this your first foray into writing. You are doing an excellent job. I enjoyed very much.
Your stories are amazing! Very well written, loved the plot twist at the end.
"Making The Punishment Fit The Crime:" - Forty-five Year Old Widowed Mother, Melissa Waring and Twenty-one Year Old College Student Son, Donnie Waring,
There is some sexual, awakening sexuality suspense to this story. The Them is very unique, though quaint. The story grips the reader's attention, while causing into questions of the next unknown to happen.
I'm disappointed the Mother Melissa and Son Donnie, after their initial escapade, was completed and laid to rest, they kept their not so solemn promises to end their incestuous love affair when their ordeal with Mr X is finished. Due to their newly found romance/love for each other I was sure they would commit to their affair for ever, with their new child and a renewed life of commitment. romantic endearment and compassion. Oh well, I'm not the writer so I will accept the story as written! There was also disappointment that Melissa did not get pregnant (her age would not have prevented such an event).
Story moved along very quickly. Would love to read more Donnie and his mother, and maybe a tangent storyline with Prof. Blake?
Fine job on your story. The ending was excellent and I didn't see that one coming..5⭐
More to come? (no pun intended) Definitely needs a follow on chapter. Oh, by the way, Webster says there is no such word as thrusted. The past thence for thrust is thrust.
Hey, great story. Very horny. Definitely needs more chapters. Donnie and his mum should take up Mr.X's offer. They could make a lot of money. After all they are quite comfortable with their bodies now. Besides, such a lot of possibilities with Prof. Blake. So what say you, a few more chapters?