All Comments on 'Making up for Lost Time Ch. 04'

Well done and a great direction you now have the story headed. Keep them rocking on and let the sexual adventures and drama unfold. There are so many hot nasty things you can have these characters do and have done. So crank it up to full sexual enjoyment and entertainment. Rock their world. Cheers

Great return to form, excellent writing. Only "complaint", Simon could have watched another session, legs high and wide on the marital bed.

So you turn the classic wife on a dom bitch who denied her husband ? And the poor husband get wimper every page,

Why in loving wife ? The wife clearly doesnt love her husband at all

Just another skank cucking her husband why do writers believe this is erotic?

It was great until she took the morning after pill. Just my kink.

This was great. Hope the next chapter she'll stop taking the pill or morning after one and really risk letting him knock her up. Would be epic to find her young lover did success with breeding. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Great work.

This is great! I like the fact you returned to the original premise of the story. Hopefully it gets better and maybe a cuckold pregnancy?

Hell yes - once a wife gets a taste of big cock she’s hooked forever. Go ahead and talk her into having your child. It’s super hot thinking that you knocked a married woman up. Hope there’s more chapters coming soon.

Much better direction. Looking forward to more.

You blew it. Poorly thought out and written. Two stars

just trash. ugh no wonder all the greats are doing a mass exodus off this site. its authors like this joker here.

The first page and a half were excellent. Realistic, erotic, loving. Then you turned her cruel and petty, emasculating her husband and turning him into a eunuch, nothing more than a sexless observer.

To compound matters, you wrote the husband as not just a participant; but a one dimensional caricature of a man and husband. He literally gets nothing from this relationship but mental, physical and emotional abuse.

How can any marriage withstand this attack?

Why would she remain married to a person that she neither respects or likes? A man who doesn’t even respect himself?

A man who loses his self respect tries to regain it. Violently. And if he can’t do that, usually commits suicide.

Really annoying these all the same fetish cuck tales. Really difficult to find a good credible plot in this LW category. And even worse, more of these bad tales have the users feedback disabled, sometimes even the evaluation section. No need for feedback, not worth to read them.

Great stuff! Much better than before. Was not a fan of the direction in the previous ch. A year to change both minds, lets get them breeding!

Love the new direction. I hope all the pregnancy play continues and she eventually gets knocked up. Keep up the good work!

Well written. This story has quite a few more chapters before the 12 months are up, if it ends then.

I went back & read all previous chapters. This is hot. I agree with several other comments. She should let this kid give her & Simon a child to raise. She’ll never be happy without a boyfriend with a big cock from now on. If she doesn’t get on birth control someone is going to knock her up anyways. Might as well be Jacob. A women wants to breed with strong males. It’s in their biology. 5 solid stars on this one!!!

Let's not get them actually breeding, that's a step too far. Perhaps write a chapter from husband's point of view.

just a wonderful series. hoping we dont have to wait as long for the next one

Not sure pregnancy is how this should play out. The story is really well written with excellent dialogue at the end. I think Jacob needs to keep a bit respectful of the husband but a bit of taunting from he and Anna is hot.

Great story... love to see where's going...

Every young guys dream. All have a friends hot mom the rest of the guys want to fuck . Some do get the opportunity. One friend mom we saw the video of her getting it from behind standing up while the friend pulled her hair back as she begged and screamed loveing his covk . Over a few years most of the neighborhood banged her and her best friend also another friend’s mom . One crazy video they took on a casino weekend the moms set up a girls weekend and spent it getting fuck by six guys the whole time . They even had them both blow the black room service guy as a tip . He shot on both faces as he said you dumb old white bitches are such pigs. Sick but true story and they both wound up divorced gor cheating years later but with coworkers

Page 3 of this is some of the hottest writing this year, great work. Agree with earlier comment that Jacob needs to keep a certain level of respect. After all, Anna is still his wife just enjoying lots of sex with a much younger man. Keep it up.

This is the most amazing story. It’s so well written.

I know we all have different kinks, but I’m hoping BedroomStaus will introduce a tiny tight chastity cage into the mix..

I’m confused. Why is it that women marry men with small cocks, while all the guys with big cocks are forever single? A classic LW cliche.

Great well written and a well put together plot. I would like to see him have to clean her oraly after and now that you have humiliated. I would love you to give him a lot more of that both from the wife and the younger lover. can't wait for more. Thank you

Love the way this is heading. Cannot wait for the next episode

Reminded me of when I returned from an out of town work trip. Pulling into our lane way we lived almost a 1/2 mile off a highway. Our house could not be seen from the highway. As I approached I got real concerned. There set 2 sheriff cruisers and a life squad. I parked and ran to the house. They were carrying Jake one of our sons Tony friend out. I asked what was going on is he going to be ok? The one Emt said he should be. Jake gave me a look that I couldn't figure out. I went into the house and found my son Tony in the living room with a deputy asking him questions. My wife Ellie in the kitchen with another deputy being questioned. I asked pretty loud would someone care to tell me what in the Hell is going on? Tony said dad Jake was trying to rape mom and I told him to let her go and get out and never to be around any of us again. Dad he was kissing mom and feeling her up. The all-star arrogant black asshole tried to hit me and telling me to mind my own business. Dad I'm sorry for fighting but I was defending myself and mom. I said I understand son.I looked at the deputy and asked so what happens nows? We are investigating and will decide when we have went through all of the evidence and talked to everyone involved. I went into the kitchen and asked how much longer. The deputy said shouldn't be to much longer and that I should step outside until they were done. I said I will not I will be in my office and before you 2 leave I need to talk to both of you. A little later my wife came into our office and hugged me crying saying she never ment for anything to happen. Jake came here and was all shook up saying that his girlfriend had broken up him crying I offered a hug and he was crying his eyes out. Before I knew what was going on he started kissing me and that is when Tony walked in. You know the rest. Yes it's a Hell of a mess. I talked to the deputies not really gaining anything. I knew Jake's dad was a real asshole and had been in trouble in the past he was a big guy and pretty tough. Not that I was afraid with all of the training that I have had and the training that I had done I did want any trouble. Before the deputies left Harman Jake's dad showed up and was madder than a wet cat. He was coming. In like a train full speed ahead. One deputy tried to stop him and Harman shoved him down. The other deputy pulled out his billy club and Harman grabbed it away from him and knocked him down. I jumped into action and kicked Harman's legs out from under him then jumped on him putting his hands behind his back. The first deputy handcuffed him. They took him away. Damnit what a mess. I talked to the Proacutor trying to help Jake I really thought that he was a good kid and just needed good guidance. He was lucky and was put on probation and had to do public service and to apologize to our famil. Harman had to serve time for assaulting the 2 deputies. Everything finally settled down. Jake did move in with his grandparents in another town.

Another 5 stars!!! Does that tell you how hot and sexy these chapters have been? Im glad you finally had Jacob fucking her bareback, at least risking knocking her up. I've read all 4 chapters now, ready for number 5!!!!

Great writing. Can't wait for the next chapter. The dialogue is what makes it stand out. She really doesn't need to get pregnant in my view - that would alter the dynamics far too much and lose the erotic charge.

I really hope that she get pregnant by jacob, that way he will always have a excuse to visit her and knock her up again and again

I hope Jacob takes over their marital bedroom.

Infinitely better than the initial version released months ago. If the story continues to focus on Anna and Jacob, I'm subscribing to patreon when you drop the next chapter

Great writing, looking forward to more. Their dialogue is really powerful. Agree with others that the story doesn't need pregnancy. It's far more tantalising with the descriptions of what the two of them are getting up to whilst the husband watches/ listens.

When is part5? ?

Okay this guy should put his foot down for sure. No where in the previous chapters did he demonstrate any desire to be dominated and humiliated. He wanted for her to have the experience of a larger cock. He wanted to share in her journey and be a part of it. No where in the stories did he express any desire for his wife to withhold sex from him. She is still

doing things with Jacob she won't do with him.

When Jacob started dominating him and his wife started humiliating him in front of this kid he should have said I want a divorce and walked out of the house.

It would have been a very interesting twist to see his wife freaking out and to see her attempt to get him back. It would be about time for her to take Simon's dick in her mouth as she does for Jacob. With open lines of communication they could have worked it out so she could have her fun with Jacob but included Simon in her new found desires.

Wow, what a fantastic series. Hopefully we'll get a part 5 at some stage. Maybe Simon films Anna (in hot lingerie, to start with at least!) and Jacob going at it bareback in the marital bed. The talk between them is super sexy and I like the idea that Anna is in control more or less, certainly when it comes to the idea of not actually getting pregnant. I think that would be a step too far and isn't necessary to keep the story going.

A five star story if I've ever read one. Brilliant. But it isn't clear if BedroomStatus is still writing - Patreon site is quiet for a while. I'm keen to subscribe if more stories are imminent but there's just the one that is yet to reach the wider world from 7 weeks ago. Can the author shed any light on further plans?

I really hope that she gets pregnant. And willingly, not by accident or trickery

I like the other part 4 when she had sex with the black guy was hoping to see what happens after the dinner date

Wow great writing, yes here comes the But. Why has the husband lost his control of his fantasy? Why do these stories always end up with the husband being relegated to being just a meal ticket for a big cock slut and her stud. The son should come home at holiday and put all three of them out of their misery, How does the husband now keep from killing himself he is not a man that any woman would or could respect.

If you do not continue story i would hope that Jacob moves on after a year just at the time when Anna has his baby.

As i said before i loved the story. Also another favorite line, " Simon wasn't the problem here. Jacob knew the cuckold would do whatever he told him to, and enjoy it to boot." really hit home for me. Most horny middle aged wives dream about "breaking in" a teenage virgin stud in the making.

Super story with really good pacing and language. The scenes from getting into the bedroom in front of the husband were incredibly well written. Getting the feelings, thoughts and words of Jacob and Anna was well thought through. Even though the actual act was a relatively small part overall, the writer's skill in making it the climax of the narrative was excellent. I loved the photo of the cum face being sent to the husband - seemed to strike the right balance for their mutual fantasies.

Hopefully there will be a chapter 5.

Couldn’t just let him have his hot wife, and her still respect and love him.

3 chapters 5 stars, this one killed it for me.

Typical, goes from no way to way overboard, and the por prick gets treated like shit when all he wanted was to watch.

You’re a great writer btw.

Regards

Stiixx

This went off the rails. The balance tipped into hubby the loser and a kid super alpha. Poof gone.

Doesn’t anybody work in cuck world? Just days and days of endless fucking and recovering? And no guy, no matter how young can cum endlessly on demand.

I know it’s fiction, but try to stay within the boundaries of physical realities.