by RonCabo
Well written and edited. Steamy sex scenes. My only complaint is how covenient things turned out. He likes Rebecca. The other two conveniently fall for each other with no jealousy at all. And we really have no explanation why he likes her more. All three seem to be equally awesome.
I'm hoping for the harem ending!
Very well written. Enjoyed the characters and would like to see more of them. Though this could be an ending, there are also more stories to be told about these characters, for sure.
Now a follow-up to see where the three nurses go from here do Nate & Juliette move or stay. Do they share the Admiral. or does Rebecca claim him for herself.
Excellent, excellent story. I love the way you paint a picture in my mind.
How can one guy with heart bypass surgery satisfy three horny nurses? The only thing I can figure is that he's three times hornier than they are.
No matter, this is one hot story. There must be a second chapter to expand on what happens next.
Really outstanding...going into all-time greats folder.
Genuinely likable characters...as well as uber-hot 4-sum, and 3-sum, and they each got the other in the end.
And technically superb-you're either a wordsmith or had an excellent editor go over it, which always adds to enjoyment.
And Juliette and Nate getting together also sweet/fun/very hot.
Very surprised not more comments-going to have to check time line.
Realize a chapter 2 would be very difficult but...
needless to say 5, and another fave story and author
But you left every one hanging what became of the friends. Did the three girls go school . do they work together did Nate & Julia become a couple or did they find their own guys?
First, great story and several potential follow-on stories!
Minor technical note; these nurses have been in long enough to be lieutenants, junior grade (O-2); promotion is normally at 2 years service, sometimes earlier. Also, ensigns (or Lt j.g.) don't normally leave the service by retirement (except under very unusual conditions), they separate or transfer to the Reserve.
Please keep writing!
This a well written story with a great happily ever after, but a sequel would be nice. At any rate it gets my 5 star vote.
Good story, although the ending was abrupt. A sequel would make a lot if sense to compensate and bring us a lot of pleasure. Thank you!
I like the story but you left the ending hanging. You need to expand what happens to each as individuals and as a group.