All Comments on 'Malcubus Ch. 03: Shallow Sex Scene'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hoooray

My new favorite series

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good series

I really like this series. Glad you are making him more confident. It makes Eric a better character. The dialogue in this chapter was also very good.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Love this series and the direction it's going!

MadJustinMadJustinover 8 years ago

Really good stuff. Looking forward to more.

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsover 8 years ago
verrry interressting, but not stupid

Still following this, wondering where it's going.

Is she evil, or is she EVIL, or does she really just need better PR?

HaruhiSuzumiaHaruhiSuzumiaover 8 years ago

I like that you're giving Eric more confidence, but I thing Rosie should retain the femdommy-ness aspect of her character. It's part of the appeal of a succubus.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
gotta have more

Dude, don't leave us hanging. This is too good not to put more in.

scorpio1121scorpio1121over 8 years ago
Nice.

Excellent story line and imagery. Great story and I can wait to see more.

mBrowmBrowover 7 years ago
Echoing compliments

Marvelous series, very imaginative! Thanks!

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