by brucewayneegypt
First of all, the series is a hot read. Mother-son and mature women excite me.
Second, your writing has improved, your proses are crisp and your style of writing is not at all interfering with the reading of the story. A suggestion would be that you work on making the readers emote than making the character explain their feelings.
Otherwise, a really fucking good story.:) Keep writing. .
the story writing seems very real and is really steamy.the content is superb but try to upload more lines in next episode or avoid dragging it cuz you hardly get time to see these things and i cannot be regular in this but i am very exited to see what happens next.i wish all moms were the same as asha
thks as i am also a mom and a son of 15 yeras but it cannot happened in india