by M_K_Babalon
You tried to add too much backstory. All you needed was, "A monster haunts the streets of the Rue Morgue."
Then add details about the stalk, the monster, and her latest victim, and then end with "battle is joined."
750 words is tough but you wasted a lot of them. A good effort though.
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