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by M_K_Babalon

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Rob_RoyaleRob_Royale3 months ago

You tried to add too much backstory. All you needed was, "A monster haunts the streets of the Rue Morgue."

Then add details about the stalk, the monster, and her latest victim, and then end with "battle is joined."

750 words is tough but you wasted a lot of them. A good effort though.

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months ago

It’s a penis free vasectomy - vagina dentata! And the prize for most original interpretation goes to 🥁🥁🥁🥁🥁 M_K 😊 Em

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Meh

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Here to be the harbinger of all things erotic, lustful, romantic, desire, fantasy. At least for my namesakes, I hope so. Min Kamadeva Babalon.