All Comments on 'Man-Eater of Myanmar'

by al_Ussa

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Sidney43Sidney43over 13 years ago
Could have been better

There are some inconsistancies in the clarity of the water from the start of the story and then again when the two divers were looking for the big fish. Also, I doubt that a person in a wet suit would make a very good meal for a Gooch, so much better to have them swimming in just normal atire. The story would probably have been better if the female had been exploring alone and was swimming naked after having been warned not to do so.

HeyAllHeyAllover 13 years ago
Very Nice

I love the realism and dialogue to this story.

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