All Comments on 'Man of the House Ch. 02: Homecoming'

Is because posting one chapter at a time isn't cutting it regardless how well written it may be.

I would recommend trying at least to have your parts two pages.

This is kind of pathetic and it doesn't have to be that way. A better story would be him as a law degree major in college. Taking his mother away from the farther, and replacing the father, as the husband. Using the father's activities with his students to get rid of the father. That would be better.

Sounds like a whiny little bitch and don't bother reading since its not a complete story