All Comments on 'Man, Woman, and Meaning Between'

That was delightful.

Excellent character building. Nice open ended ending. 5⭐s.

Great character development and a sweet story about falling in love. I enjoyed the backdrop of Shanghai, a place I have never been. Thank you for writing 5*

Thanks the comments! On this, and other stories.

This is lovely. SO well-written and the romance/sex is organic and natural. Sweet!

This is a lovely story. More please.

Your love for this city shines through. I haven't been there in decades and yet your writing was so evocative I felt as if I were remembering every place you described, even the ones that didn't exist back then.

Excellent, excellent, excellent!!! (I am very hard to please.)

To add to my earlier comment: I see most of your stories included here are multi-part. Personally, I prefer shorter ones like this one as I can fit them into my schedule.

Thanks for the comment. I'm going to o experiment with the format. Multipart (so far) helps me focus and debug. This was my first attempt at longer. I'll keep looking to add tools.

Enjoyed the story but feel we were left seriously hanging. I was thinking she was the CEOs daughter, but you missed that possible plot line - LOL! If you're going to dabble in this genre, jump in. Leaving the story unfinished is unacceptable! LOL! 4.4*

Thanks for the comment. That is a good idea. I eluded to something along those lines (not Mark's CEO, the other company). Anna is "special" but is that because she's just awesome or connected? Both characters are meant to be extremely competent. Even if they have no connections, they'll be fine.

Fun story!

5

wonderful story, love the thoughts about travel, and being in the moment. I agree the ending either needs to go to the end as a story and not cliff notes, or leave at a point that finishes. Like maybe, elaborate getting on the plane, getting the seats, and fall asleep on the way to a new chapter. Please write more of this, you have the talent for it.

Thanks for the comment. I'll consider my use of epilogues in shorter works. It's also possible this one needed to be tightened up.

Very likely I will revisit themes of professional romance in and out of China.

Excellent!