All Comments on 'Mana and Monsters'

Let me start off by saying that I never saw that coming which made it even better. Your descriptive writing is so precise which allowed me to draw what I think is a perfect mental picture. Most mental pictures are guesstimates at best but I feel you did one hell of a wonderful job. You also left so much out so that we can look forward to getting answers in your future writing of which I cannot wait to get to. Thank you for this excellent story and for have the courage to post your first story. It looks like a real winner so far and I hope it continues to impress.

I hope you continue w this story. She now has to get home, whilst de facto pregnant - I'm thinking an airship pickup. No idea why she would do such a thing, but I'm hoping that's forthcoming!

Hey, just a quick note on the tags... Unfortunately for those of us on mobile, the tags show up at the end of the story, because there's no sidebar.

I mention this just in case you write something that needs any content warnings ahead of it.

(And thanks for the chuckle at 'consentacles.')