All Comments on 'Manas Comes of Age'

by NaugthyRambler

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

We need more such stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I loved the slow movements and erotic buildup. Would like to see more tension or conflict and something about the husband. Otherwise it is simply a boring first time virgin story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

You just left it hanging in the end... There should be more to it.. also a sequel perhaps with husband in the scene

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Hooked!

PrachiiPrachiiabout 3 years ago

The way they lust for each other was amazing. Needed some more while making love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Anjali is a keeper. Full stop. Period.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent: ★★★★★ (5)!

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