All Comments on 'Mangrove Creek'

I loved the whole Aussie flavour and the naturalism of the characters.

A solid 5 star tale! Loved it from start to what I hope is not the finish. Please keep it going. What are the big plans? Who is the other woman? Don't leave us in suspense for too long.

Excellent! Your story was well written and left me wanting more. I can't wait to read your next installment.

A full line up of stars from me. Cracking good story, but what about the brunette from Dolly’s shop.

Plenty more mileage in this I hope.

I probably will continue it, depending on the feedback I get from it - it's a bit outside my usual genre so I'm experimenting with this one. I appreciate your comments :)

I too would love to read more of this as a series, it has so many possibilities!!

This may have been outside your normal genre, but you've done a terrific job with it. I can pretty well guarantee that people will keep reading if you keep writing.

Fantastic beginning to what I hope will be a long horny tale. More please. Thank you

I Thought there was too much sex in your writing and not enough story to build it up. A.F.C. Somerset.

I was on the edge of my seat reading this!! PLEASE continue bc there is so much potential!

Enjoyed the story. Will be looking for sequels. This has great potential as a series, with them building their dream getaway place for like-minded individuals.

Really enjoyed it, cant wait for the next chapter, with more characters?

Love the Aussie terms and slang, especially picking out the Adelaide accent. Well constructed erotic story with that contrast of the remote bush that only an Aussie can really appreciate and relate to, well done.

HOT!

This is a fantastic story that needs many more chapters with other from the “club” joining the group.

I know it has been a while but when is the next chapter due ?

Like the story! Anticipate their development of their minimalist naturist stingers community/retreat.

Absolutely loved it, not only because it is set in Australia but also because it is something that can and does happen, the wife and I have been members of a few nudist clubs and believe me this kind of thing does happen and on occasion we have been part of it. Loved the way it was written.