All Comments on 'Manic Mom'

Get a Sybian, lady. Yeesh!

Very different storyline. Very hot read. Thanks for sharing.

Your story had a wonderful setup and a good payoff, but for me the transition could have been better.

This is just my opinion and I write this in hope it aids your future output. The transition stage needed a lot more sexual tension for this to be a top class erotic story. That could have been achieved if you had included a lot more of their thoughts. Including the conflict of emotions from both mother and son would have made this very exciting - Her needs are more important to him because he loves his mother and would do anything for her.

Just my opinion and I hope this helps. Feel free to comment on my work.

He is basically raping an insane woman! Plus the writing is lacking in all regards! GARBAGE!

part 2 please

Hotter than hell! Man, you have to give us another bite of this one! Another chapter please.

Definitely a story that deserves a follow up! Thank you!

Only a person with a bi-polar mother can truly understand this. The flashing of al of the breast except the nipple one day to prim and proper the next.

5 stars. Well done.

You have landed on my TOP20 list for the second time. The story was outstanding, MOTHER and SON are always the best.......THANKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT ONE.

Absolutely Fantastic story! Would love to read a follow up.

5*'s

Thanks for the Great Read

I love this story for so many reasons; the mother/son theme, the quick setup, the incredible sex, etc. I’m hopeful a follow up story is forthcoming, but PLEASE do not be cliche and have the son get the mother pregnant.

Would love to read chapter 2.

thats was great. thank you

Just great. Hoping for more. I'm really starting to read your stories. Thank you.

may we have more please!!!!!!!

Can't wait for a second chapter in this hot mom-son story!

Thanks

Wow.. what a hot mom son story. Rated 5*.

So fucking hot! Can't wait until the next chapter. Five stars and a favorite point!

You can't leave us hanging... :-)

It is blossoming in a lovely hot steamy love and lust story. Don't stop to keep us waiting. Want more. Looking forward to know how both deal with brewing lust and simmering love in the life of the mother and son. How would he handle her mother's love and lust would be interesting to read. Also would love to see her getting pregnant with his child. That would give it a stinging twist at the end or create a new beginning of happily ever after

Has NOTHING to do with manic depressive disorder. It a totally different disorder. The story otherwise is good.

It needs to be proofread to eliminate some minor errors but over all it was pretty damned hot! Thanks.

That was simply amazing writing, it was nice to have a change from the usual seduction story.

Great read but we WANT another chapter.

Needs more chapters, let's see where this goes. Could be a wonderful thing for both. If she's 45-ish, he might still get her pregnant. That would be a nice development.

Niiiiiice!

Something out of the ordinary - at least I've not come across this one. Very well done.

I like how it is explained that repressed needs often come out in the manic periods and that Gayle must have underlying issues. And I love that Gayle has come to realize it isn’t her bipolar disorder that makes her need and want…. a big thick cock (sorry) fucking her (god I like that), but it does take away her ability to ignore her need. What a wonderfully sexy idea (getting wet writing this). I wish I had an excuse like that.

Excellent story, not the 'run-of-the-mill' drama found here; I am actually quite touched by the emotions and undertone put into this.

Now, mother's wants have to be addressed...I trust this will be a entertaining as Chapter 1.

My ex-wife was diagnosed bipolar manic depressive. At times it was a great ride. Until she stopped drinking. Then all hell broke loose. It's too bad that she was diagnosed after our divorce. There was too much water under the bridge at that time.