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photogman186 months agoI like the idea that the Father in Law caught them. MiL might have hid it, and husband would have required proof. Good story line.
iammweaselover 1 year agoCould have been good. Or I should say better. Loved the premise with catching the dog knowing the wanker but this was clearly a weak RAAC story with nothing to actually merit.
There was literally nothing here to warrant a RAAC ending, not that there was one, in fact you shot your wad in the beginning and then seemed to get too bored to do much more than just go through the motions in the middle and the end.
Anonymousover 1 year agoGood start. No middle. Dud end. Generous 3. Do a rewrite. Or, just do the middle and ending. Or at LEAST do an ending that supports itself, because the rest is too weak to support anything but a great ending... and frankly, you made the victim into a total wus.
