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Click here"Awww, poor old man."
She knelt in front of his armchair, eyes sparkling, and said in her most seductive, submissive voice.
"I'm sure you can think of some other way to shut me up ..."
She took the book from his hands and put it aside. Their eyes met and they both burst into laughter. Greg looked at her elfin, expressive features, and her still slim figure, and marvelled again at how fortunate he'd been to find her. They may only get to spend twenty or thirty years together, but that was more happiness than many got to experience in a lifetime. He smiled down at her fondly and placed a hand on the back of her head as she grinned and reached for his zip.
"I love you, Alice."
and he even told you 3* was what he should have given you. Is he getting soft in his old age? Nah, he’s just inconsiderate jerk, fairly impressed with himself and his IQ and completely inconsistent with his ratings.
I was riveted and held captive! Such a wonderful and sweet tale. You should be proud of yourself. Honest criticism is one thing, spiteful comments are another. Everyone is entitled to be here, writers or not. Sharing yourself by writing is opening your soul to the world. It can be scary, heartwrenching, soul searing and ultimately very rewarding!
Those who can, write.. Those who can't, are over critical haha!
Good characters and interesting plot line. Just a slice of life........ Thanks for sharing.