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photoman001photoman001about 14 years ago
No Mills and Boon

I can see it's a first story and on that scale it's a nice try. I found it mechanical and it didn't "get me in". Do it if you enjoy it but don't plan on writing a book.

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I love writing stories. I want to thank Tom for helping me edit my newest story "The Plug" and for beginning to assist with editing my last story which I will re-submit after it is well writen