All Comments on 'Maple Street Revisited part 3'

I’ve been enjoying reading this series very much, but I felt that the character of Jeremy seemed pretty shallow and Esmerelda didn’t really seem believable to me. With that, both earlier stories were a 4* for me.

This story brought it up a notch, as you’ve begun to correct both of those problems. I hope you will continue the series, because I’d like to see where it goes! Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

Good chapter!

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Really want to see where this goes! Please keep it (and them) coming. It is clear you have some secrets to reveal, and your writing is very smooth and natural, and it draws us in. More, please. Please.

The plot thickens! Glad I was late to the show and don't have to wait like the others! LOL!

Love your writing.

Cheers

SAGE