All Comments on 'Maragana Girl Ch. 20'

love this story line and cannot wait for the next chapter

a weird but wonderful story. I've enjoyed the visit to a new and novel social situation. Thank you!

Just read all 20 chapters in one sitting, this is amazing stuff. I sense we're heading toward the end now and am glad to be on

board.

What a world, and what amazing characters you've populated it with.

I log in everyday just to read the next chapter. I love the character development and story.

Artful writing. A unique society and its inhabitants insightfully created by this exceptional writer that gives such enjoyment with each thought-provoking visit.

Two people that are finally finding that a loving relationship can happen. Eliose and Malka were two broken people that were able to find out that loving someone can be obtained without cruelty or dishonesty.

Waiting to read the rest of the chapters in this saga. Brilliantly written.

This may be the two/thirds point of the story, but it would appear to be one of the masterpieces of social commentary, I look forward to reading about the further interesting adventures of this group.