All Comments on 'Maranara Hospital'

A saucy little story.

Now THAT's a nice piece of writing. Plenty of good details. Here's three I particularly enjoyed: the Q-36 explosive space modulator (sure! who doesn't like the Martian?), the Alfred Nobel/TNT/blow joke, and that "pastafarian" is given as one of the tags for the story (as if I'm going to find any more Spaghetti-Monster based stories).

Heck, none of those three details (out of many, many good ones) are even sexy in any way. Doesn't matter. Good writing. Good writing about sex, too. Very amusing, all the way through. This story reads very much like a labor of love. I love it.

(It took me a while to figure out the "emulsified legumes and gelatinized fruits," but I got it. Great work.)

Only five stars because they don't let me choose six. Thanks for the story!