by Sutty93
Wow, fantastic start to what could be a very hot n sexy story. I like the way you write and hope you keep writing stories like this one and even continue this one.
5’6” 190 isn’t the “fatter side of slim,” it’s obese. I realize this is just fiction, but too many Americans live with this same misconception.
Really enjoyed the story. Interesting dynamic with a good spin at the end of it which is a good lead in for a continuation.
Good concept but the whole fight and no pressing charges thing just made me laugh. Never happen that way in a million years.
A sub mommy and randy girlfriend is a good start though.
I agree with Frankie. Great storyline. It is a great shame you did not continue writing.
I agree. A very good story. I'd love to read more, of anything you write.
Thoroughly enjoyed this story. I would like more. The major characters are developed. The plot and subplots have been established. Would like a Chapter 3 where the son dominates the mother. Would like a Chapter 4 where mother, Hailey, and son interact. Chapter 5 where Hailey dominates mother. Chapter 6 were mother, and son go on date and son controls/dominates mother. With thought, this could probably go on for 10-15 chapters.
Awesome story you need to continue to follow these 3 lovers!!!!!!! One comment was stupid if you don't like these stories then don't read them. Please continue though it's been awhile!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved the story but you need a follow up though it's been a while there still need another ch or two!
Great story hope you add a chapter to this one so many options available for you create a great series
I loved most of the story but the confession was just too convoluted. Why go through this when it added nothing to the story?