All Comments on 'Marcos and Kaylia'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
excellent story wrong category

This story is well-written, but its category is wrong. The use of such words as "bitch" and "dirty little slut" are completely out of character for a romance story. The problem with this story is not its erotic element, which is quite fine in the Romance genre, but rather the lack of loving tenderness that is so much a part of romance. This story belongs in Erotic Couplings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
So hot

Amazingly hot man where are you from?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wrong

You need to remove this story from romance, it is anything but.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
phew

Didn't find that the least bit romatic but damn if it wasn't hot as all fuck.

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