All Comments on 'Marcus & Lexi'

Good girl Lexi, opening your pussy for Daddy

I would love to have my daddy fuck and eat my pussy too.

Guess it was ovulation time as females lay eggs.

Perhaps the daughter was lying on the bed or laid upon the bed.

...idiots like UltimateHomeBody make grammar "corrections" that repeat the original mistake? The word "laid" is the past or the past participle of "lay." UHB should have written "...the daughter ... lay upon the bed."

I sure am an idiot. Only suggest grammar when the story would improve with small changes.

Google: lay or lie usage

Or just check literotica for writer help guides.

Nice effort, but too short. Marcus should have fucked her more. Chapter 2 should have her get pregnant because she is not using birth control.

too short, nice though

Surely you jest. Have you any sense of innuendo or subtlety? Lets just say, don't quit your day job.