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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

i aint reding allat

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This chapter actually got worse than Ch 1... Is the protagonist's name Miles or Marcus?

Why is he suddenly targeted by Nazi religious anti-robotists?

Just because you're writing fiction w- a black protagonist doesn't give you license to drop n-bombs.

Plus you're proofing went to hell...

GeoD

DmitryDmitryover 11 years ago
One part

in me saying - that would be fun, but the other screaming NOOOOOOO. Great story.

xxxecilxxxecilover 11 years ago
Someone would have noticed....

if these robots can raise children, intelligently listen to problems, and "think", that implies such a strong evidence of sentient that someone else would've noticed before now – if not the companies that build the sex robots. The world building and knowledge of police procedures needs work, but the premise is extremely exciting and so I must fave the story anyway despite its weaknesses..

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Loving this story very intriguing and well written. Thank you for giving me the pleasure of reading it. Definitely five stars!!!

DesiremakesmeweakDesiremakesmeweakover 11 years ago

This is gonna happen 4 real one day, isn't it?! Very amusing. I think clever too.

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