All Comments on 'Marcus Get Medical Attention Ch. 01'

like the idea.

Great start. I hope it’s a one recovery 🥴

5*

Tc

a good start with a believable premise and potential to lead down several paths.

Minor quibble: palpate, not palpitate.

Nothing story. You should put it in non-erotic.

Good start to the story. Keep going, I look forward to reading more from you.

Very nice ... intro.

Thanks for the encouragement. and the tips! This is my first story. It will get a little steamier I promise.

Any time I see someone use the abbreviation "bro" I skip right on by. No one speaks that way anymore.

Well written. Looking forward to more.

Reminds me of the young Personal Support Worker that cared for me while I had two broken wrists and one broken knee. After my first sponge bath she thanked me for not allowing an errection. From that experience I verify your story is very true to life. Well told too.

BTW : Passed is previously, the word you want is past, twice. Third time used was appropriate.

I really liked the story - it was sort of a slow burn but since there are a few chapters it works to the story’s advantage.

Good job - keep writing!

Really like the story, well written and look forward to seeing what comes next. Well Done. 5/5