All Comments on 'Marcus of Duros Ch. 02'

You refer to Marcus as Jarrod in a couple of spots.

"My Lords..." Jarrod began haltingly.

puzzled Jarrod as he finished speaking

Besides a bit of grammar problems and misnaming, an excellent series that I hope you continue!

I understand wanting to maintain some type of story flow with chapter structure but this wasn't really a chapter. Just far too short. It screams for more details and embellishment. I would at the very least include more from Marcus and his thoughts on the journey to his flat.