All Comments on 'Mardi Gras Mischief'

An interesting take on a bit of magic in my home city, though some aspects seem exaggerated lol. I like the story and am curious if there will be a sequel.

more please.

What a great story. Five stars hardly seems like enough. Well done.

Thank you everyone for your great feedback. This was our first story. We had ALOT of fun writing it.

The three of them should spend another night together

Hate to diss someone from my own neck-of-the-woods, but this was WAY overwritten.

Maybe take a creative writing course and learn how to economize and self-edit.

This is a great start. I can see so many possibilities here. Cassandra is the long lost relative of Acadia and takes over the mansion. Chris is caught cheating and is divorced. Mom and son join Cassandra moving to mansion. 3 become 1 raise family and bring the "love" mansion back to "life". Please give us more.