All Comments on 'Marge, Mary and Me'

You have gotten way too crazy for me.

I'll give you credit for doing over-the-top bullshit better than anybody currently posting on this site. This was just crazy. Does Mary know he's the one that beats up her father? Why would a young girl lust over an old fart that's banging her mother like a cheap drum? I could go on, but you know what you do. Nuts!

you need him

CDT60 is up to his old tricks again, double his pleasure.

5

You are lost in the dark... your timelines are fucked.

When you are sober you have to re-read this story.

Should have been longer

You write a wild story, my friend. It caught me off guard at first but it works. I enjoyed the read so thanks for sharing.

Way too much packed into the story. I had forgotten the first wife and all the crap and problems. Than I'm dealing with a mother and daughter hooked together in a relationship. Just too much.

Thanks for the story, not as crazy as your usual writings but none the less good.

Way over the top crazy. Too much for me.

Felt so rushed reading this story.

It was trying to cover too many plot points in a short amount of writing.

Thought the development was very matter of fact and it just jumped from point to point

And not a fan of the piety stuff

Normally it would have been interesting to understand why the first wife ditched Mr. Magic Dick for some philandering asshole. But everything else was so bizarre there was hardly space for more drama and complexity.

Every man who gets dumped by a cheating whore should be so lucky. I suspect that doesn't happen in most cases. Thanks for the fantasy, and the effort.

To wild for me. Loony tunes!

but eight months after separation they were still married. How does that work exactly?

last third was a little off. still a 4 for effort

I appreciate the effort and all as every author here is offering up free entertainment for the readers/followers/fans, whatever, but any story that includes a “lesbian” with a current big boyfriend with a little dick that wants to give her mother’s big dicked boyfriend a whirl just isn’t for me.

Colour me confused, asidd from the divorce timing. Suddenly everyone loves each other with no evidence of any interaction before then. Then we have a self proclaimed lesbian who has a string of boyfriends and wants dick. No mention of girlfriends.

Possibly your worst put together story.

Well done, enjoyed the story and hope they can enjoy their future. Two women in the relationship is interesting to read about but difficult in the execution.

Thanks

Nothing in this story made sense

1) divorce took 3 months yet 8 months

Later they’re still married

2) Mary is a lesbian but has a boyfriend

AND lusts after moms boyfriend

3) his 18 year old daughter has had “tons of girlfriends

AND boyfriends “ what she started when she was 12????

PLEASE STOP WRITING!!!!!!!

Load of crap.

That’s some crazy ass trucker shit

Pure reading enjoyment.