by ZotDragon
Its ok. I enjoyed the first chapter more. Let's be real, though . If you want to write a Lesbian themed saga - it's pretty clear both husbands have been relegated to far side of stage - have the honesty to label it as such.
Gave it 5 stars. I also sent a private feedback with an idea.
Dan
A stretch to put this in the LW category. Belongs in Lesbian. Even Group Sex might be OK, but the last page was Lesbos all the way. Writing was fair, just poor category choice.
A pretty good read and some exciting play between the wife's.
Though it does seem to me the wife's are cheating on their husbands by febbing whete they are going, and why. Then there is the emotional cheating impact as well !