All Comments on 'Maria of House Marcellus Ch. 02'

This story has sexy elements, the surge of power, her arousal...but the slap was an unnecessary element.

But...the Romans' didn't have steel so his penis couldn't be compared to it...maybe iron...but the violence upon the slave is keeping with the reality of their life...it was violent and hard. One more minor complaint...it's too short. It would be nice to have more information, more depth..but please continue with it.

Actually, the author is correct. The Roman Army was using Noric steel a few hundred years before Christ, as recounted by Ovid: "molle latus tristisque serae convicia fecit.vsaevior illa freto surgente cadentibus Haedis, durior et ferro, quod Noricus excoquit ignis, et saxo, quod adhuc vivum radice tenetur, spernit et inridet, factisque inmitibus addit. Hence, that mean gladius for which the Roman legions were known.