All Comments on 'Maria the Witch Ch. 01'

it was all right, it's not what im into but i wont complain lol, i like the idea of maria being so horny and obsessd with the guys mom, and i like how she is able to make guys cum for hours, and is able to grow a cock, but im more into your realistic stories. but this story was not like the humilation from your other stories... anyways, i just hope for more party mom, you got me hooked :P

how about showing a penis growing and coming out of her, as she fucks the real mom, you should take advantage of the use of magic powers, like maybe makeing thomas's penis even smaller, maybe make maria's tounge longer when she licks pussy, maybe maria doggy's and titty fucks the mom herself. you need to add more stuff like that.

after reading this story more then once, it got better, i wish it was longer, and i would love another chapter, but more about maria, teasing thomas, and flirting with the REAL mom, the humilation in this story wasnt so much, i liked more of maria teasing thomas about boneing his mom, more then i liked him becoming his mom, cause he still got plesured, but PLEASE continue this story, cause the only problom i have is, you always leave the readers on a cliff hanger :/ lol and use and take the magic to the EXTREAME, she can do anything, she's a horny goth witch, she would abuse her powers any way she can to get with his mom, nothing can hold her back, do what you tried to do with the genie story, but make it hotter sence shes, a horny bi girl, she can really tease thomas by jokeing with him but you know shes not jokeing, she wants to fuck his mom, SHE HAS THE POWER!!! CONTINUE PLEASE :D

It was a very nice read even though I dont particularly like magic themed stories.

I hope you are writing a sequel for it.

Great story