All Comments on 'Mariam: A Girl Of Clay'

Hmmm, Golem sex. Now I've heard everything.

Would be interested in where this is going.

So he's getting it on with a pile of mud? As interesting as that "might" be, how is this incest?

This i s a good story but i think you got in the wrong category. Shouldn't this be in non-human or sci-fi/fantasy? As far as i could tell in this story hes just the guardian not the creator so i think your in the wrong category it said the rabbi created her not the guy right? other then that it wasn't bad but it was very confusing for a bit you should of mentioned she was made of clay earlier on i think

Good and nasty in spots, but a little weird.

romantic and exotic. i love lovers made of other things, especially when they love you, and i and how erotically exotic and strange her body is, such as the frothing mud that wears off her body. i wish that she would have been able to take him, but as it is it's a lovely little story.