All Comments on 'Marie'

Keep Donovan's role small. Eva captured marie, so she deserves her :)

I can't wait to see where you take this LaLa. That Donovan sounds like a hot piece of hunkish man. Eva and him could have a lot of fun with Marie.

You are obviously a writer of great skill. You have me hooked, my sweet Lalady!

nah! doesnt work.

Such a rapid seduction, hard to believe, but very hot. I wished they'd gotten to finish before D showed up.

You need to change the category for this story if you are going to introduce a male character! LESBIAN means female characters — not a threesome, menage e trois or however you want to designate it. It is SO disappointing to be enjoying a good story only to have the author introduce a male character into the story. Why didn't you place it in a different category? I only could rate it one star, just for your effort in writing it.