All Comments on 'Marie's Key Pt. 02: Just a Toe In'

It’s all just perfect. I’m bowled over by the realism and sensuality of this story, the love that the main couple have for each other is pretty much palpable. It’s refreshing to read a story where the couple are secure in their love for each other. Genuilove this story and am looking forward to reading more.

Thanks for sharing, Tess (UK)

Really liked this story. I especially like how distinct and natural Marie's voice is, both in dialogue and her narration. She feels like a real person, once you'd want to hang out with, and she and Scott together feel like a real couple. Their affection and attraction feel very natural and comfortable. And like Marie says in part 1, that makes the sex scenes even hotter. It's not just that we want to see action, but that we want to see these characters have a good time in whatever form that takes.

Reading these not only got me fired up, they also made me happy.

Given the stats their marriage is fucked, sooner than later

Stupid idiots they are.

Scores 1/5 deserved so. Anyone who espouses this lifestyle has rocks in their head.

Highly erotic. Brilliant writing. Awaiting more.